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Friday, 24 August 2018

persuasive writing

Dear Saffire

Remember that time when  we burnt cookies. we had such an amazing time. That one day came, I moved away I left  you and I hate it. I know it wasn't my fault it wasn't anyone's fault. I would love it if you would come visit me. It would be amazing. This is a piece of writing to persuade you as to why you should come down to christchurch. Hope I can convince you enough.

Now we haven't seen each other  in like 1 year and 7 months. We call like twice a week. Your always there for me any time. It's not the same  it will not be until we are reunited with each other. Now your the person who knows exactly what i'm going through and  I know exactly what your going through.

You should come  down for a few weeks to see the South Island life and see how South Island is very different to the North Island. The kids and mumma bear  and papa bear and I we miss you so much it's not the same anymore.

Best Friends should not be separated  even us, we were trouble together and it was fantastic not once when we were together not once did we say we were bored. If you come down her you will never want to  leave.

We could go shopping, we could got to the movies, we could do anything that  you can't do this in the North Island. It breaks my heart to know that your in the North Island and i'm in the South Island. Anything could happen you could meet my friends and we could have an amazing time.

I know im talking about all this and  I would really like this to happen. we could save up as much as we can. I could buy your ticket home and you could buy your ticket up.  We could do more chores to get more money and we could save it up so we can see each other.
Now i hope you feel like you want to come down and  have fun and see what it's like. We all want you to come we all want you to come down here. I hope you  get the confidence to ask you rmum to come down here.
                                              Love you xxx

From krystal.